thanks dreamy eyes…am glad that someone read that part…am gonna add more soon..its not like the story isn’t ready…it is ready…but i wonna hear more about the details you noticed in this part? if you and the others dont mind

thanks dreamy eyes….well am adding more now…enjoy it

There he was the guy I saw for the first time in the shopping mall, while I was walking with my brother buying some things for the house. I didn’t notice him first, but I am sure he had my attention the second time I saw him. I didn’t think that I will see him again, but the second time was when I was entering my grandmother’s house. My grandmother was sitting in the living room watching a religious program on T.V. I greeted her and then I headed to the next room which belonged to my uncle who was twenty one years old working in the marine force. His work doesn’t allow him to come and visit us that much. He only comes back home in the weekend. While I entered his room, there was some one sitting on the table reading a book I recognized from the first moment of entering the room. I was the one who chose the book and bought it especially for him, because it was his birthday. My uncle, or who I thought was my uncle, was facing the wall concentrating on the book. He didn’t notice me when I entered the room and I was glad that he didn’t.

“Happy birthday to you” I started singing “happy birthday to you, happy birthday to my sweet uncle, happy birthday to you” I ended my singing while I did it in a funny way.

The guy, who I thought was my uncle, turned to me with a smile upon his face. Right at that moment I didn’t know what to do or even what to say, I just opened my mouth to say one word;

“Sorry” I said while I turned back and went out of the room.

It was the most embarrassing moment I have been through for all my life. I didn’t know what to think of while going back to the living room. I didn’t know who he was or even what was his name, but I knew for sure that he is the same guy who was looking at me in the shopping mall. I didn’t tell my grandmother about it or even my uncle who came and sat in the living room in a about a minute. He was happy to see me, and he said that he liked the book I brought to him.

“ Oh, by the way don’t go to my room, because I’ve got a visitor” he said looking at me “ I know you want to see the new books I brought, but that will be later ok?” he continued.

“Too late for telling me that” I thought to myself.

I didn’t dare to ask my uncle about him, and I guessed that that guy didn’t tell him about what happened this morning. Like every week, I stay in my grandmother’s house for the weekend. I didn’t see that guy again on that day, but I heard him talking with my uncle when I passed by my uncle’s room going out to the kitchen to help my grandmother.

After I woke up the next morning, I went to the living room to have breakfast with my grandmother. She was there sitting alone, having a peace of bread with cheese.

“ Good morning grandma, how are you feeling today” I asked.

“ I’m fine, come on” she said “ have your breakfast you are late in waking up today”

“ Where is my uncle? Aren’t he going to have breakfast with us today?” I asked her

“ He went out with his friend to buy some things for the kitchen” she said while turning on the T.V

Two hours passed since we had breakfast. I was still in the living room reading the newspaper while my grandmother was on the phone talking to my mum. A minute later my uncle entered the room carrying lots of bags with him. Then he looked at me and said;

“ There she is Khalid, tell her about the book she brought to me” he said “ You know, I mean the book you were reading last night” he said still looking at me.

At the beginning I didn’t know what did he mean, or why he was telling me that. Just after my uncle entered the living room, his friend entered after him. Then I understood what my uncle’s was saying. He was talking to his friend, asking him to tell me about the book.

“His name is Khalid” I said to myself while looking down to the newspaper not wanting to look up

Of course he didn’t do that, he just smiled passing the living room not wanting to bother us.

I didn’t know what to do, I was still looking at the newspaper not concentrating on any headline at all

That mysteries guy who had a beautiful smile was standing now near to my sister. He didn’t change that much, but I thought that there was something wrong. I lost the sense of hearing, I couldn’t hear any of the songs they were playing. After standing there feeling lost, not knowing why exactly, I left the room.

thats all for now…or what do you think?

It was 10 pm when the guest started leaving our house. They were smiling greeting my mother before leaving. I was standing in the living room with my cosine. She was asking me about the university and how was my study going, but I wasn’t really hearing her. I wasn’t in a mood for having any conversation now. I heard some one calling me from the other room. I entered the room and it was my uncle talking to my mother.

“ Come with me” he said. “ I want to tell you something” my uncle continued

“ Not now” I said “ the guests are leaving some one should stand outside before they go” I said in a hurry wanting to leave the room.

“ It’s ok, never mind about that, come with me someone wants to see you” he said

I didn’t know what did he mean or who wanted to see me, all what I knew that I wanted this night to end soon. He held my hand and walked heading outside the room. He entered the outside room of our house. The room which was supposed to be for the men guests. I didn’t understand why he was taking me to that room, and who will be that person. He entered the room, and I entered after him. I was shocked, of what I saw. Khalid, my sister’s future husband, was standing there and no body with him.

“ Remember Khalid?” my uncle asked me. “ He wanted to see you, it’s been a long time since he last visited us at our home”

I was out of words not knowing what to do. I didn’t understand what was going on, or why my uncle brought me here. Khalid was looking at me, waiting for me to talk or at lest to say hello, but I didn’t.

“ They look a like right?” said my uncle.

“ What do you mean they look a like?” I finally said not understanding anything

“ Khalid and your sister’s husband” he said “ didn’t you notice? It’s amazing how twins can be” he said.

“ Twins!” I thought with a surprise look on my face

“ Well, Khalid wanted to see you today” said my uncle “ he wanted to do that long time a go, but I told him its better to wait till after your sister’s engagement party and there he is”

I was quite, I finally understood.

“ Hi Khalid” I said smiling to him.

“ I told your mother about it, and she said ask her” my uncle said “ And by the way, he want to get married soon” said my uncle

The day of my sister’s engagement party was the day Khalid asked me to marry him. A memory will last forever.

taraaaaa….THE END

Who wonna know what was the fiction and the non-fiction parts in the story? LOL

dreamy eyes…thanks again for showing interest

good morning Ruby…hope your doing fine….well umm that was the end…i guess it was a happy ending after all….as for me i dont like to write about happy stuff lol ..umm dont know..i like dark stuff more…oh well thanks again for your nice comments