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  • #453867
    سكر زياده
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    great mobi
    amazing
    i just wish i have the ability to write poems just like you

    #453940
    mobi
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    My dearest Sweet,

    Peace be upon you. May Allah be with you and always
    protect you under His Mighty Wings whenever you are,
    wherever you go and whatever you do.

    Hello! How are you? How I wish you are always fine
    and in pink of health all these days and keep away
    from all worries whatsoever.

    When I was still a beginner like you, I found it quite
    difficult to write poems. Slowly and slowly I can
    write poems especially when some of my friends teach
    me how to do it. . However, reading love story books
    and literatures help me a lot. You can also do these
    especially when you have inspirations and when you are
    in love.
    Ability to compose poems can be acquired
    through learning and experiences. Poems from
    literature books will help you. Also, if you wish I
    can be of great help to you.

    Should you need my assistance, I am always able and
    available anytime. You will find out sooner that
    writing poems is not just as difficult as what you
    think.

    Have a nice day!


    mobi

    #454304

    Great poem

    thank you

    #454392
    سكر زياده
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    thank u mobi i would appreciate your help

    i want u to read this
    and tell me what u think

    notice: its not mine

    here it is

    Written as an outsider,
    marked only by a stamp,
    I leaf through a yearbook,
    and peer at it under the lamp,
    there’s your picture,
    yep-the nicest smile,
    look there you got mentioned,
    for running the fastest mile,
    perfect brown hair,
    so loving but not loved back,
    walking down the hallways,
    you think only of what you lack,
    sure on the outside,
    you seem picture perfect nice,
    but all your imperfections,
    crawl through your mind like lice,
    but you dont have to worry about gossip,
    since at the chain your at the top,
    you’re not the one crying on the wall,
    picking up all your tears with a mop,
    that’s the person in front of us,
    that’s the person we all see,
    that’s the one who’s hair is so perfect,
    the one who got blessed with popularity,
    and you’re the one we try to be like,
    the one we follow trends made by,
    but when we try to compliment,
    you brush us off like a fly,
    no, surely i’m not like you,
    I’ll never have nice hair,
    and as your friends leave,
    you notice I’m still standing there,
    even though your hair is perfect,
    even though everyone knows your secrets confide,
    there’s only one person,
    who knows what hides inside,
    behind the glossy lips,
    and under the highlited hair,
    I’m the only one who realizes,
    there’s a soul hiding in there,
    the only one who realizes,
    you’re thinking about your end,
    the only one who figured out,
    all you needed was a friend

    #455170
    سكر زياده
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    hey mobi
    im waiting

    #455610
    NirvanA
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    [/أSo close no matter how far
    Couldn’t be much more from the heart
    Forever trusting who we are
    And nothing else matters

    Never opened myself this way
    Life is ours, we live it our way
    All these words I don’t just say
    And nothing else matters

    Trust I seek and I find in you
    Every day for us something new
    Open mind for a different view
    And nothing else matters

    Never cared for what they do
    Never cared for what they know
    But I know

    So close no matter how far
    Couldn’t be much more from the heart
    Forever trusting who we are
    And nothing else matters

    Never cared for what the do
    Never cared for what they know
    But I know

    Never opened myself this way
    Life is ours, we live it our way
    All these words I don’t just say
    And nothing else matters

    Trust I seek and I find in you
    Every day for us something new
    Open mind for a different view
    And nothing else matters

    Never cared for what they say
    Never cared for games they play
    Never cared for what they do
    Never cared for what they know
    And I know

    So close no matter how far
    Couldn’t be much more from the heart
    Forever trusting who we are
    لوان]

    #455667
    mobi
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    I love that song by Metallica , thank you for post it

    regards

    mobi

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